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  1. #1
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    haiku about summer

    go ahead, take a stab at one, about summer!

    rules of haiku:

    Haiku-poems consist of respectively 5, 7 and 5 syllables in three units.

    for instance, here is mine:

    july, oh my!
    bar-b-que pool party yeah!
    cold beer tastes good

    et tu?

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    I suck at poetry, but I'm up for a challenge. So here goes...

    It's flip-flop season!
    Sun beating down on my feet,
    Pale girls need sunscreen.

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    Oh, distant summer!
    I remember you so well
    but now it is cold.

    Pity those of us in the southern hemisphere... :(

    (And those of us without literary talent.)

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    yeah! love these. keep them coming.

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    My skin's suspicious
    What is going on up there?
    Holy crap! The sun!


    Summer - nemesis
    of ice creams everywhere, I
    love you anyway

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    season of my birth,
    fireflies, ice cream, bare feet.
    ouch! was that a bee?


    if your hot dog falls
    into the campfire - rejoice!
    there's more room for s'mores.

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    Wonderful summer
    perfect in san diego
    I'm glad I moved here :)

    jt

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    sun, you kiss and kiss
    my white shoulders red and sore,
    'til frost soothes again.

    I feel like a loser for not mentioning hot dogs and fireworks in mine.

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    Sandles I love so much,
    Ice cream on my toes and nose,
    flowers growing between the concreate

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    The Denny's is Gone
    Where are we going to eat
    steak & shake is slow

    Rootbeer float for sue
    but she will never get it
    steak & shake is slow

    Irish boys are hot
    they all want to do susan
    she'll be deflowered

    damn berry berry
    same in price as a milkshake
    all clients think we are drunk

    steak and shake sucks ass
    but he dennys was not there
    what's a girl to do

    niel's ass is nice
    steph felt it needed grab-age
    we grabed it a lot

    Robin's date was bad
    Barron is a needy boy
    Robin said no way

    flip the damn burger
    fuck you fuck you fuck you fuck
    give up the burgers

    the girls have lost it
    hunger got the best of us
    falling asleep now

    no more tequilla
    fuck you fuck you fuck you fuck
    bring on the food-age

    we are too hungry
    cannot write the haiku now
    give us the damn food

    so, damn unhealthy
    cheesey potato goodness
    bring on the desserts

    *eat your burger bitch
    zombie waitress mumbles a lot
    syphallis, maybe?

    no dying on my watch
    how come we have 2 ketchups?
    choking on burger

    we are dying now
    before we leave steak & shake
    "casket store" is gone

    it was next to "HERBS"
    what are we going to do?
    creamation for us

    we don't need prozac
    haiku's are all we need
    they're our drug of choice

    we thought it was done
    but, haiku has a mind of it's own
    it just keeps going

    susan it's done
    time to shut your fucking mouth
    susan it's done

    that is so damn mean
    stephanie is a fucking bitch
    this haiku is through

    THE END


 
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