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  1. #1
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    Critique my site, please?


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    Hay!

    The words on the left are too small, in a bad font, and shouldn't be in the green boxes. I do like how they turn pink once you click on them.

    I like the cut-n-paste words at the top of each page.

    You aren't taking advantage of the whole space -- everything seems shoved to the left.

    The links page should be more interesting... think FONTS!

    Otherwise it looks good and has a fun feel! Nice work! You should be proud of this!

  4. #3
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    It's a really good idea, althoug the words are to smal in the menu bar and the bvackground it's a little to bright...

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    Great concept, but you might want to proofread (or better yet, have a writer/editor/English teacher do it) and clean up the copy on your main page. One of the sentences seemed like it was going somewhere and then it just sort of ended. And I think you had some misspellings.


    I love the ransom letter title headings though.

  6. #5
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    I like the collagey stuff!! Could this be used for the choices on the left? That would be really cool! I love the idea of the site! Smart!


    http://www.girlsavage.com/

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    You guys are so awesome. I'll put all of that into consideration and re-post my stuff later.


 

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